Here's a related topic with several school logos. https://www.beltchecker.c[...]3347db0580

Also with the 6+ colors in this logo, printing it can be somewhat expensive depending on who you go see.

+ you have a gradient in the letters which makes it impossible to do as a screen print.

Your logo is a bit ... mental :) Are you really that stuck with Mentality?

I'd probably go much simpler, you want something that will read well on light or dark backgrounds, uses few colors with no gradients so you can screen t-shirts or embroider patches with it. I'm no graphic designer, but I've attached a concept that's more like what I'd do.

The concept is strong, it communicates peacefulness, mindfulness, strength and unity. The triangle frames the central character and alludes to the historical use of the symbol in BJJ lore. As others have noted, the gradients are a huge problem when it comes to printing. A general rule of thumb for all branding elements is that you can happily add as many colours and gradients as you want, but ultimately, can it also be reduced down to a single colour and still work and be recognisable. Think of famous logos - Facebook, Twitter, Google etc all of them colourful yet can also be fully recognisable and printable in black and white. There are work-arounds - graded lines, dots and hatches could replace the gradient itself, although it begins to start look messy with too many interfering marks. Tonally, the choice of colours is also a problem, potentially - there is not enough contrast and separation tonally between the blues, greys and blacks. Finally, I personally am not a fan of overlapping text+visual elements, I prefer to separate them. But that's personal preference. My own logos designs are pretty basic as this is not my speciality. I try to keep things simple and to brief: https://www.behance.net/g[...]ascots-etc I hope my comments are constructive and helpful as you move forward with this project. (NB I am not touting for work, I'm too busy to take on new commissions)